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Rhaps
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Feedback Wanted Nov 21, 2018 12:11:12 GMT -4

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Post by Rhaps on Nov 21, 2018 12:11:12 GMT -4

Hey everyone. Not sure if people are still checking on this site but I am currently writing a book and I'm looking for people to give feedback on it. It's only 41,000 words at the moment and it's still a first draft so there is some work to be done but if anybody wanted to read it and let me know what they thought then it would be extremely helpful. The genre is fantasy and all constructive criticism is welcome. I can also provide a synopsis for anyone if requested.

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