Post by Sublime on Aug 3, 2013 1:51:44 GMT -4
Great job everyone, these are the result for Decimation 7
Explanation: This match was predetermined for Syn to win and this reader honestly believes he earned it. It was sad to see only an entrance from Brett Steel, which took him out of the running for the win, and though Rurouni’s posts had few spelling mistakes he had many run on sentences and did not have any especially inspiring moments. Syn has really grown in his sentence structure, though he still repeats words too much, and it was rather enjoyable when the two veterans ganged up on the egotistical superstar. It’d be nice to see more emotion in both role player’s posts and see fewer errors both in spelling errors and grammatical errors. (Though we all make mistakes)
Judged by Sublime
This is a tradition I will not let go in EVPW. A bi weekly bar brawl. This is open to all comers and the brawl is filmed 2 days before EVPW airs so any wrestler can join without fear of being tired on Tuesday night.
Explanation: That bitch can drink
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Explanation: The winner in this match is Nicholas Carson; he had excellent sentence structure, clean spelling and smooth formatting that made his posts easy to follow. Also, interactions between Nick and Helena were amusing to say the least, good use of the commentators, and emotion that connects the reader to the story. Kahlan on the other hand; left something to be desire in her use of the color commentator Ray White, offered little substance to her posts (though I did like the London bridges moment in her last post) and her posts did not flow easily despite a lack of spelling/grammatical errors. Also, as Carson pointed out in his final post, she seemed to forget that she was in a singles match and stepped outside of the rules of the match.
Judged by Sublime
Explanation: I would have really liked to see what you two could have done together, but we all understand that sometimes life interferes with rping.
Judged by Sublime
Explanation: This was the hardest match I have ever had the pleasure of judging, thanks in part to the length of the contenders posts *coughrhapscoughvladcough*
Vlad really did a wonderful job; as per usual he had excellent form, wonderfully quotable moments, they have that certain Vlad spice to them,and I laughed out loud in the scene where Rhaps lands into the chair after executing the moonsault on Vlad. However,the moment with the drill fell flat, seemed a little like going through the motions, and there seemed to be a certain level of involvement missing that left this reader feeling unattached. Big Jim put up a great fight as well; he had some nice imagery, colorful vocabulary, nice use of the flaming chair,and I found the moment when Vlad's areola flew onto Ray hilarious. Jaggeroth was lost in a sea of text. Although he had many enjoyable moments, loved the part where all the other wrestlers ganged up on Jag or the chainsaw massacre moment when the lights go out and come back on to find Jaggy wielding a weed-whacker, and when he brought Jerry Nate into the mix to fuck up his old mentor's face.
Last but not least, Rhaps really brought it all; he had vivid description, excellent flow/transition between wrestlers, his use of the commentator Ray White was very amusing, liked the double choke slam by Jim and Jag, and the flapjack slam into the razor wire wrapped wood was wonderful. All and all this was a tough match to call and it was really very close, everyone did an excellent job, but Rhaps burned brightest.
Judged by Sublime
This week you guys pulled out all the stops.
Most of you know me and know me to be a fair judge so please respect these findings.. If you need help with your writing or want pointers and the explanation isnt enough. Feel free to shoot me or any of the people judging the matches a PM and ask a few questions or ask for a few pointers.
There were some really impressive matches this week, but a bit of a lack of activity as well, I hope to see more people involved in the next decimation line up, but to those involved this week… YOU KICKED ASS!
Furthermore, if anyone is interested in posting how their match ended.. Feel free to post an in ring post and link to the thread. Thanks again!
Strong Foot Forward
Syn vs Brett Steel vs Rurouni Kenshin
Triple Threat
Winner: Syn
Syn vs Brett Steel vs Rurouni Kenshin
Triple Threat
Winner: Syn
Explanation: This match was predetermined for Syn to win and this reader honestly believes he earned it. It was sad to see only an entrance from Brett Steel, which took him out of the running for the win, and though Rurouni’s posts had few spelling mistakes he had many run on sentences and did not have any especially inspiring moments. Syn has really grown in his sentence structure, though he still repeats words too much, and it was rather enjoyable when the two veterans ganged up on the egotistical superstar. It’d be nice to see more emotion in both role player’s posts and see fewer errors both in spelling errors and grammatical errors. (Though we all make mistakes)
Judged by Sublime
Match 2
Open Bar Brawl
Winner: Your Mom
Open Bar Brawl
Winner: Your Mom
This is a tradition I will not let go in EVPW. A bi weekly bar brawl. This is open to all comers and the brawl is filmed 2 days before EVPW airs so any wrestler can join without fear of being tired on Tuesday night.
Explanation: That bitch can drink
Judged by Sublime
Match 3
Nicholas Carson vs Kahlan
Singles Match
Winner: Nicholas Carson
Nicholas Carson vs Kahlan
Singles Match
Winner: Nicholas Carson
Explanation: The winner in this match is Nicholas Carson; he had excellent sentence structure, clean spelling and smooth formatting that made his posts easy to follow. Also, interactions between Nick and Helena were amusing to say the least, good use of the commentators, and emotion that connects the reader to the story. Kahlan on the other hand; left something to be desire in her use of the color commentator Ray White, offered little substance to her posts (though I did like the London bridges moment in her last post) and her posts did not flow easily despite a lack of spelling/grammatical errors. Also, as Carson pointed out in his final post, she seemed to forget that she was in a singles match and stepped outside of the rules of the match.
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Match 4
Chris Pyro vs AJ Scally
Bull Rope Match
Winner: Draw
Chris Pyro vs AJ Scally
Bull Rope Match
Winner: Draw
Explanation: I would have really liked to see what you two could have done together, but we all understand that sometimes life interferes with rping.
Judged by Sublime
Main Event
Vladimir Strife vs Rhaps vsJaggeroth vs Big Jim[/]
No DQ Fatal Four Way
(King of the Deathmatch Title Match)
Winner: Rhaps
Vladimir Strife vs Rhaps vsJaggeroth vs Big Jim[/]
No DQ Fatal Four Way
(King of the Deathmatch Title Match)
Winner: Rhaps
Explanation: This was the hardest match I have ever had the pleasure of judging, thanks in part to the length of the contenders posts *coughrhapscoughvladcough*
Vlad really did a wonderful job; as per usual he had excellent form, wonderfully quotable moments, they have that certain Vlad spice to them,and I laughed out loud in the scene where Rhaps lands into the chair after executing the moonsault on Vlad. However,the moment with the drill fell flat, seemed a little like going through the motions, and there seemed to be a certain level of involvement missing that left this reader feeling unattached. Big Jim put up a great fight as well; he had some nice imagery, colorful vocabulary, nice use of the flaming chair,and I found the moment when Vlad's areola flew onto Ray hilarious. Jaggeroth was lost in a sea of text. Although he had many enjoyable moments, loved the part where all the other wrestlers ganged up on Jag or the chainsaw massacre moment when the lights go out and come back on to find Jaggy wielding a weed-whacker, and when he brought Jerry Nate into the mix to fuck up his old mentor's face.
Last but not least, Rhaps really brought it all; he had vivid description, excellent flow/transition between wrestlers, his use of the commentator Ray White was very amusing, liked the double choke slam by Jim and Jag, and the flapjack slam into the razor wire wrapped wood was wonderful. All and all this was a tough match to call and it was really very close, everyone did an excellent job, but Rhaps burned brightest.
Judged by Sublime
This week you guys pulled out all the stops.
Most of you know me and know me to be a fair judge so please respect these findings.. If you need help with your writing or want pointers and the explanation isnt enough. Feel free to shoot me or any of the people judging the matches a PM and ask a few questions or ask for a few pointers.
There were some really impressive matches this week, but a bit of a lack of activity as well, I hope to see more people involved in the next decimation line up, but to those involved this week… YOU KICKED ASS!
Furthermore, if anyone is interested in posting how their match ended.. Feel free to post an in ring post and link to the thread. Thanks again!
