Post by KingBear on Jul 20, 2013 21:25:10 GMT -4
Here are the results ya'll have been waiting for. Like I said, very out of it lately, sorry this took so long. I appreciate everything everyone did in these matches. And I'm glad I got the read the matches I did read and participate in the match I did.
Without further Adieu, here are the match results.
Explanation: This match obviously goes to Jerry, I was looking forward to reading this match and I'm sorry it didnt happen. Maybe next time gents.
Explanation: I'm sure all of the participants will be spending quite a few days in the hospital after this brawl. If not at least having to get a blood transfusion or two. Thanks for making this brawl an awesome one guys!
Explanation: I'm sorry this didnt go over better Big Jim, for your next match, I will give you the option of picking any opponent. Whoever you want.
Explanation: This was a very close match. I'm gonna take this moment to talk to both participants. Ethan, you are a top tier writer and RPer but the problem with that is it makes the judges have to take this to a different level. When we read the posts, we look at all aspects of Grammar, Spelling, Creativity and Flow. You are a very creative writer with good spelling and good grammar. But flow is where you have to work hard, when we read the posts, we need to be able to read without having to pause and go "Wait.. What?" This happens quite often when reading your posts. When you're writing, it kinda goes from Wrestling Manual to awesome visualization of match. Personally, I say pick a style and stick with it.
Envy, your posts, as usual, were very good but you were lacking slightly in the flow issue as well as the obvious typos and random bad word use *cough*throbbingbosom*cough*. On that note, the thing I can say the edges Envy out over Ethan was the minor mistakes and the flow. Thanks for the good match you two, I appreciate the great writing and I cant wait to see Ethan improve even further like I know he can.
(Judged by KingBear and Rhaps)
Explanation: Though SM Raye posted more than the other members of this match by far, I would not necessarily award him with the win; quality over quantity. Scally did well in the match, his writing had very few errors and was easy to follow… However, he immediately dropped the element Samuels introduced by having Bella and Erik team up and he moved wrestlers all over the map (not following their previous positions). Raye’s posts were decent and I loved the part when Chris and Raye fell into the flaming tables. Unfortunately, it had quite a few errors, I found myself getting bored halfway through the posts (I love to read so length has nothing to do with it, it’s a lack of interesting events that caused me to be incapable of remaining amused), and I was confused a majority of the time. Also, I feel a little bad for pointing this out, because I am guilty of it occasionally too, but there is such a thing as too much detail/over explanation. I loved how Steve made another appearance, but I also felt like SM had an opportunity to write something really impacting with the elimination of Bella and Erik and it fell flat. Kade’s posts were adequate as per usual; initially I wasn’t really wowed with his posts, but they were well written and flowed nicely. I also enjoyed the element he added of Bella and Erik working together a bit because of their original plan to be a tag team in the match. Also, I was quite fond of the moment of Scally’s dizziness and the description of his vision slowly returning to normal. Finally, I loved the breakfast club moment when Kade thrusts his fist in the air and the Reifenheiser lager, hah! All in all, the reason I would give the win to Kade is that his posts were more amusing, had less errors and I didn’t have to reread them multiple times to figure out what was going on.
NOTE: Everybody seemed to have a hard time transitioning between whom the subject of the paragraph/sentence was about. It gets very very confusing very fast when we blink from one person to another without some sort of transition… For Example, Kade rains a flurry of punches down upon Scally’s head, leaving him dazed. **Meanwhile** **Elsewhere** ***congruently** , Ray and Pyro lay motionless beneath the rubble of the flaming tables, the medical team struggling to put out the inferno and save the two from further injury.
(Judged by Jerry Nate and Bella Morte)
Once again, thank you to everyone involved and know that every judgement made, I agree with whole heartedly. I always try my best to remain unbiased and I try to pick judges who can do the same. In my 8 years experience E-Fedding, I've only ever had people question my judgements for "Political Reasons". Other than that, if anyone has any questions about the judgements, or wants hints or tips, feel free to PM me or any of the judges listed above.
On that note, thanks again for the matches and all that and I hope we can continue to provide awesome pieces of work for people to read. I've never met a more skilled group of RPers than when I E-Fed and ya'll are part of that group, thanks for helping me improve as a writer and GM every time I read/write a match.
Congrats to the winners and one more note. Because of the way the SCW Deathmatch went down, I'm changing the rules and the way the Tag Titles will be given out. The two winners of the match are allowed to pick their partners to face off in a match once more for the title shot. Meaning Kade Samuels and SM Raye get to pick whoever they want to be on their team to go up for the tag titles. This decision was brought forth by KingBear and confirmed by Vladimir Strife and Jerry Nate.
Without further Adieu, here are the match results.
Strong Foot Forward
Jerry Nate vs Ryan Hughes
No DQ
Winner: Jerry Nate
Jerry Nate vs Ryan Hughes
No DQ
Winner: Jerry Nate
Explanation: This match obviously goes to Jerry, I was looking forward to reading this match and I'm sorry it didnt happen. Maybe next time gents.
Match 2
EVPW BAR BRAWL!!!!!
BAR BRAWL BAR BRAWL BAR BRAWL!
Winner: The only man that won this fight was the one that wasnt involved.
EVPW BAR BRAWL!!!!!
BAR BRAWL BAR BRAWL BAR BRAWL!
Winner: The only man that won this fight was the one that wasnt involved.
Explanation: I'm sure all of the participants will be spending quite a few days in the hospital after this brawl. If not at least having to get a blood transfusion or two. Thanks for making this brawl an awesome one guys!
Match 3
Spike "Balls of" Steel vs Big Jim w/Cletus
Hardcore Match
Winne: Big Jim
Spike "Balls of" Steel vs Big Jim w/Cletus
Hardcore Match
Winne: Big Jim
Explanation: I'm sorry this didnt go over better Big Jim, for your next match, I will give you the option of picking any opponent. Whoever you want.
Match 4
Decimator Title Shot
Aryana "Envy" Renfield vs Ethan Hawke
TLC Match
Winner: Aryana "Envy" Renfield
Decimator Title Shot
Aryana "Envy" Renfield vs Ethan Hawke
TLC Match
Winner: Aryana "Envy" Renfield
Explanation: This was a very close match. I'm gonna take this moment to talk to both participants. Ethan, you are a top tier writer and RPer but the problem with that is it makes the judges have to take this to a different level. When we read the posts, we look at all aspects of Grammar, Spelling, Creativity and Flow. You are a very creative writer with good spelling and good grammar. But flow is where you have to work hard, when we read the posts, we need to be able to read without having to pause and go "Wait.. What?" This happens quite often when reading your posts. When you're writing, it kinda goes from Wrestling Manual to awesome visualization of match. Personally, I say pick a style and stick with it.
Envy, your posts, as usual, were very good but you were lacking slightly in the flow issue as well as the obvious typos and random bad word use *cough*throbbingbosom*cough*. On that note, the thing I can say the edges Envy out over Ethan was the minor mistakes and the flow. Thanks for the good match you two, I appreciate the great writing and I cant wait to see Ethan improve even further like I know he can.
(Judged by KingBear and Rhaps)
Explanation: Though SM Raye posted more than the other members of this match by far, I would not necessarily award him with the win; quality over quantity. Scally did well in the match, his writing had very few errors and was easy to follow… However, he immediately dropped the element Samuels introduced by having Bella and Erik team up and he moved wrestlers all over the map (not following their previous positions). Raye’s posts were decent and I loved the part when Chris and Raye fell into the flaming tables. Unfortunately, it had quite a few errors, I found myself getting bored halfway through the posts (I love to read so length has nothing to do with it, it’s a lack of interesting events that caused me to be incapable of remaining amused), and I was confused a majority of the time. Also, I feel a little bad for pointing this out, because I am guilty of it occasionally too, but there is such a thing as too much detail/over explanation. I loved how Steve made another appearance, but I also felt like SM had an opportunity to write something really impacting with the elimination of Bella and Erik and it fell flat. Kade’s posts were adequate as per usual; initially I wasn’t really wowed with his posts, but they were well written and flowed nicely. I also enjoyed the element he added of Bella and Erik working together a bit because of their original plan to be a tag team in the match. Also, I was quite fond of the moment of Scally’s dizziness and the description of his vision slowly returning to normal. Finally, I loved the breakfast club moment when Kade thrusts his fist in the air and the Reifenheiser lager, hah! All in all, the reason I would give the win to Kade is that his posts were more amusing, had less errors and I didn’t have to reread them multiple times to figure out what was going on.
NOTE: Everybody seemed to have a hard time transitioning between whom the subject of the paragraph/sentence was about. It gets very very confusing very fast when we blink from one person to another without some sort of transition… For Example, Kade rains a flurry of punches down upon Scally’s head, leaving him dazed. **Meanwhile** **Elsewhere** ***congruently** , Ray and Pyro lay motionless beneath the rubble of the flaming tables, the medical team struggling to put out the inferno and save the two from further injury.
(Judged by Jerry Nate and Bella Morte)
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Once again, thank you to everyone involved and know that every judgement made, I agree with whole heartedly. I always try my best to remain unbiased and I try to pick judges who can do the same. In my 8 years experience E-Fedding, I've only ever had people question my judgements for "Political Reasons". Other than that, if anyone has any questions about the judgements, or wants hints or tips, feel free to PM me or any of the judges listed above.
On that note, thanks again for the matches and all that and I hope we can continue to provide awesome pieces of work for people to read. I've never met a more skilled group of RPers than when I E-Fed and ya'll are part of that group, thanks for helping me improve as a writer and GM every time I read/write a match.
Congrats to the winners and one more note. Because of the way the SCW Deathmatch went down, I'm changing the rules and the way the Tag Titles will be given out. The two winners of the match are allowed to pick their partners to face off in a match once more for the title shot. Meaning Kade Samuels and SM Raye get to pick whoever they want to be on their team to go up for the tag titles. This decision was brought forth by KingBear and confirmed by Vladimir Strife and Jerry Nate.
