Wet Pants? Try Wet T-Shirt... Nah..

[KingBear]

Nice job folks, this was Decimation 5. As to the title, yeah.. No Wet T-Shirt Contest, sausage fest in here then my sister.. No bueno.. One more show until the PPV. Is everyone ready?

Strong Foot Forward
Spike “Balls of” Steel vs Syn
Singles
Winner: Spike Steel

Explanation: Both men wrote a very entertaining match. The only thing I can say why this didn’t go to Syn is the grammar being used. Being a seasoned veteran, Spike was very easy to read and understand and he also had great spelling and grammar. Syn did very well himself, his match was easy to follow as well and entertaining. The lack of announcers hurt him a bit in his first post as well, other than that, both wrestlers did well. But this time I have to give it to Spike, though I’d like to see a rematch down the road.
Judged by KingBear

Match 2
Open Bar Brawl
This will be another tradition I hope to start in EVPW. A bi weekly bar brawl. This is open to all comers and the brawl is filmed 2 days before EVPW airs so any wrestler can join without fear of being tired on Tuesday night.
Winner: Bella Morte

Explanation: That’s right.. She won this Bar Brawl.. What’chu gonna do about it?

Match 3
Bella Morte vs Amanda Nathan
Submission
Winner: Amanda Nathan

Explanation: Sorry guys, I’m still working on this one, I haven’t been able to focus at all today.
Judged by KingBear

Match 4
Shawn Dreamer vs Kade Samuels
Two out of Three Falls
Winner: Kade Samuels

Explanation: This was an enjoyable read, but the win has to go to Samuels in this match. Dreamer really needs some polishing in his writing style; ill structured sentences and poor grammar made posts hard to follow. Also, the use of the commentators was a bit bland and I would have liked to see JP and Ray’s personalities shine through more in Shawn’s posts. Lastly, Dreamer’s handle on Kade’s personality was a miss and he came across as more violent/wrathful then I have ever seen him appear in any of his previous posts. That is not to say I found his posts by any means unbearable, there is talent there, and I found his use of the fat lady in the end quite amusing. Kade on the other hand, was a pleasure to read as usual. The back and forth between the commentators in his post was hilarious. His writing was easy to read and had many attention grabbing moments; like the reappearance of the fat women and the piece of chicken in his teeth when he came up from between her thighs. However, I would like to point out that it was not the best work I have seen produced by the rookie and his loveable personality didn’t shine through as much in this match.
Judged by Bella Morte

Match 4
Chris Pyro vs Rurouni vs Create-A-Wrestler
Triple Threat Match
Winner: Chris Pyro

Explanation: I’ve started a rule that says if someone actually posts in their match and doesn’t have a response, the poster takes the win, this is no longer a no contest. It counts as a win for the person who did their action post. I was hoping to see things go a bit better in this but no worries gents, I understand.
Judged by KingBear

Main Event
Wolverina w/Matthew Cassady vs Jerry Nate
Hardcore Match
Winner: No Contest

Explanation: This match went alright at the beginning, a bit of skilled back and forth. But things broke down when the 3 day rule was voided by one of the participants and everything turned into a brawl. KingBear ended up having to break up the fight and split everyone apart, leaving EVPW wondering who would have won.
Judged by KingBear

Seems like this was the best week yet! THANKS EVERYONE!

I read all of the matches but I like to spread the love. Just know that I do agree with the other judgements in full. Most of you know me and know me to be a fair judge so please respect these findings.. If you need help with your writing or want pointers and the explanation isnt enough. Feel free to shoot me or any of the people judging the matches a PM and ask a few questions or ask for a few pointers.

Like I said above.. This was the best week yet, totally awesome, most of the matches were highly active and I appreciate it folks. Just remember the three day rule, that triple threat could have gone better. Anyways, thanks again folks. If you have any questions for me, feel free to shoot me a PM or ask me in Chat or on Skype.

Furthermore, if anyone is interested in posting how their match ended.. Feel free to post an in ring post and link to the thread. Thanks again!

[Syn]

If I may ask what part of grammar cost me the victory...I realize I probably should have used the announcers in the beginning but it happens.

[KingBear]

It was more the random use of stuff like "seen" in the context of "the crowd seen the action" and things like that.. You type very well but it was broken spoken grammar is all. It made sense, like I said, I could read the post very easily but there were just a few things like that that had me cringing a bit as a writer. No offense meant in that.

Though I do want to say Syn.. For someone I have never seen RP.. You are pretty impressive. I really am looking forward to watching you progress in your skill.. How long have you been RPing?

[Syn]

No offense taken I saw that you got me for grammar and I wanted to know what grammar so that I have a point of reference to improve with and get better. Well as for your compliment about my writing at it's current state I thank you, as for how long I have been RPing as is the term being used in a match writing fed such as this, first time doing this. As for Promo feds 3 years off and on...Most in TWG

[Envy]

So.... When you gonna finish putting up the explanation for Bella and Amanda? Hmmmmmmmmm?

['The Franchise' SM Raye]

Good question lol... Though if it wasn't storylined I would still have put Bella over lol

[Sublime]

I'd give the win to Amanda, just want some critiques etc