Post by KingBear on Apr 19, 2013 0:27:15 GMT -4
HA! You know you all love me.. Well.. Except Seraphiel and AJ.. You two dont love me.. I feel the unlove radiating off of you two.. *pouts*
Anywhosers! Hey this is the end of our match card.. We have until Tuesday April 23rd 2013 before the next card goes up.
Explanation: It looks like this wasnt our strong foot forward match. Neither wrestler even went to the ring. I'm sorry guys but I am entirely disappointed.
Judged by KingBear
Explanation: Every week we're going to post a bar brawl in the match card. Kayfabe it will take place 2 days before the card so everyone is welcome to join the brawl and just have some fun. No stress about winning, no worries about posting better than everyone else. Just break shit and fight! Or have a drink!
Judged by KingBear
Explanation: The two that showed up for the match are both guilty of the same E-fedding sin of saying name of the move they were doing. This one was a little tough to judge, but I don't think the two knew each other well prior to this match. Scar barely pulled this off because he had a little more substance than Pyro's post, and a bit more in the way of quality. 2 1/2 stars
Judged by Jerry Nate
Explanation: I love you both, you're awesome writers but Bella you have a bit more to learn about match writing. The match was close but I have to give it to Jerry, the flow was smooth, it was easy to read and comedic in different ways. Bella you did very well but I found myself pausing at points in your post and having to reread to figure out what was going on. I am entirely impressed by both of you and look forward to eventually matching up against you. Thanks for the awesome read.
Judged by KingBear
Explanation: This match was pre-planned for Kade Samuels to lose, however, let it be known that the skill of his user would have altered this outcome if the decision had not been predetermined. Ethan Hawke was well written, but at times he came across as one dimensional, simply a cocky asshole. Though his opponent Ethan Hawke executed his writing well; Kade Samuels rose above with his relatable character, creativity and excellent structure. It is important to make the reader connect with a character and for that character to have multiple facets to their personality, Kade Samuels did this flawlessly. This match was pre-planned for Kade Samuels to lose. Judgement by Bella shows Kade winning the match if not for pre-determined status.
Judged by Bella Morte
I read all of the matches but I like to spread the love. Just know that I do agree with the other judgements in full. Most of you know me and know me to be a fair judge so please respect these findings.. If you need help with your writing or want pointers and the explanation isnt enough. Feel free to shoot me or any of the people judging the matches a PM and ask a few questions or ask for a few pointers. You guys were awesome. And we're going to leave the Bar Brawl open for a while just so people can have a little fun.. I'll eventually post the bartender kicking everyone out or calling the cops.
See ya'll in the threads.. Let's work on some Promo's and get some story lines going. I dont know about ya'll but I love story lines. They just make everything that much more entertaining.
Also, if anyone is interested in posting how their match ended.. Feel free to post an in ring post and link to the thread. Thanks again!
Anywhosers! Hey this is the end of our match card.. We have until Tuesday April 23rd 2013 before the next card goes up.
Strong Foot Forward Match
Seraphiel Rayel vs AJ Scally
No DQ
Winner: NO CONTEST MOTHER FUCKERS!
Seraphiel Rayel vs AJ Scally
No DQ
Winner: NO CONTEST MOTHER FUCKERS!
Explanation: It looks like this wasnt our strong foot forward match. Neither wrestler even went to the ring. I'm sorry guys but I am entirely disappointed.
Judged by KingBear
Match 2
Open Bar Brawl
This match is for any member who gets approved after the card is posted to join. Anyone is welcome in this match.
Winner: EVPW AS A WHOLE!!!
Open Bar Brawl
This match is for any member who gets approved after the card is posted to join. Anyone is welcome in this match.
Winner: EVPW AS A WHOLE!!!
Explanation: Every week we're going to post a bar brawl in the match card. Kayfabe it will take place 2 days before the card so everyone is welcome to join the brawl and just have some fun. No stress about winning, no worries about posting better than everyone else. Just break shit and fight! Or have a drink!
Judged by KingBear
Match 3
Scar vs Chris Pyro
Singles
Winner: Scar
Scar vs Chris Pyro
Singles
Winner: Scar
Explanation: The two that showed up for the match are both guilty of the same E-fedding sin of saying name of the move they were doing. This one was a little tough to judge, but I don't think the two knew each other well prior to this match. Scar barely pulled this off because he had a little more substance than Pyro's post, and a bit more in the way of quality. 2 1/2 stars
Judged by Jerry Nate
Match 4
Jerry Nate vs Bella Morte
Hardcore Rules Pillow Fight
Winner: Jerry Nate
Jerry Nate vs Bella Morte
Hardcore Rules Pillow Fight
Winner: Jerry Nate
Explanation: I love you both, you're awesome writers but Bella you have a bit more to learn about match writing. The match was close but I have to give it to Jerry, the flow was smooth, it was easy to read and comedic in different ways. Bella you did very well but I found myself pausing at points in your post and having to reread to figure out what was going on. I am entirely impressed by both of you and look forward to eventually matching up against you. Thanks for the awesome read.
Judged by KingBear
Main Event
Kade Samuels vs Ethan Hawke
Falls Count Anywhere
Winner: Ethan Hawke
Kade Samuels vs Ethan Hawke
Falls Count Anywhere
Winner: Ethan Hawke
Explanation: This match was pre-planned for Kade Samuels to lose, however, let it be known that the skill of his user would have altered this outcome if the decision had not been predetermined. Ethan Hawke was well written, but at times he came across as one dimensional, simply a cocky asshole. Though his opponent Ethan Hawke executed his writing well; Kade Samuels rose above with his relatable character, creativity and excellent structure. It is important to make the reader connect with a character and for that character to have multiple facets to their personality, Kade Samuels did this flawlessly. This match was pre-planned for Kade Samuels to lose. Judgement by Bella shows Kade winning the match if not for pre-determined status.
Judged by Bella Morte
Thanks everyone for posting in your matches!!!
I read all of the matches but I like to spread the love. Just know that I do agree with the other judgements in full. Most of you know me and know me to be a fair judge so please respect these findings.. If you need help with your writing or want pointers and the explanation isnt enough. Feel free to shoot me or any of the people judging the matches a PM and ask a few questions or ask for a few pointers. You guys were awesome. And we're going to leave the Bar Brawl open for a while just so people can have a little fun.. I'll eventually post the bartender kicking everyone out or calling the cops.
See ya'll in the threads.. Let's work on some Promo's and get some story lines going. I dont know about ya'll but I love story lines. They just make everything that much more entertaining.
Also, if anyone is interested in posting how their match ended.. Feel free to post an in ring post and link to the thread. Thanks again!
